Introduction-Thesis statement: We, all people, are in some way resemble each other. But every one has some differences, some secret charasteristics. Sometimes one can be aware of this, and sometimes can not. I really had no idea about what makes me different from other people. I thought about it deeply. It was hard for me to differ myself from others. Then I was able to recognize my differences. First of all, when people see me, they think I am very shy, but when they talk to met hey get shocked to see that i am very talkative. And one of the different feature that a have is that a can’t drink water while walking. And there is a fear of me which is about of a think that would catch me from my ankle while i was sitting in my bed.
Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: It was first when my roommate told me that she suprised when she get to know me better that I understand people think I was shy.
A.That was surprising for me to recognize.
B.Then I see that everybody thinks this way.
C.It is an enjoyable period when people begin to know me better.
Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence: Generally my friends laugh at me when I say “hey! wait for me, I paused to drink water.”
A.When I do this I feel myself like the girl in tv ads. “ why can’t I chew gum while walking?”
B. I really don’t understand why it isn’t hard for other people.
C.I don’t want to suffocate so even friends laugh at me, I will continue to pause while drinking something.
Body paragraph 3:
Topic sentence: All people have some fears, I think. It is normal for human being. Mine is may sound interesting.
A.I think this fear first appeared when I watched the movie “6. Sense” in which a dead girl hold the ankle of little boy suddenly.
B.The fact that my bed is a bunk, makes this fear worse, unfortunatelly.
C. Friens who like jokes, doesn’t help me at all.
Conclusion: Sometimes it doesn’t matter how different we are. We’re all the same. But the little differences between us makes our relationships interesting. It is lively to try to know different people.
5 Mart 2009 Perşembe
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